Who me?

Posted on June 16, 2012 by https://vivinfrance.wordpress.com

 Trifecta gave us a picture prompt and asked for a response in exactly 33 or 333 words

 If I don’t look
he won’t see me.
Invisible,
that’s what I’ll be.

Oh go on then,
I’ll just take a peek.
Oops it’s a cow.
I think I’ll come back next week.

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17 Responses to Who me?

  1. purplepeninportland says:
    June 22, 2012 at 03:40

    Very cool, Viv. I don’t know the site, but it sounds intriguing.

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  2. Trifecta (@trifectawriting) says:
    June 17, 2012 at 20:00

    Thank you so much for linking up to Trifextra this weekend. The challenge this weekend will be judged by the community. So please come back to the Trifecta home page and click the stars next to the three posts you most enjoyed. You only have until Monday at 8 am EST, so hurry!

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  3. Kelly Garriott Waite (@kgwaite) says:
    June 17, 2012 at 18:32

    I love the way this girl thinks – If I don’t look he won’t see me.

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  5. jannatwrites says:
    June 17, 2012 at 06:18

    I like your poem and the little game of peek-a-boo. So cute!

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  6. Tessa says:
    June 17, 2012 at 03:01

    Absolutely adorable. Loved it!

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  8. OldDogNewTits says:
    June 16, 2012 at 21:38

    Very simple and cute. 🙂

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  10. Hannah Gosselin says:
    June 16, 2012 at 17:46

    So cute!!! I love where this went, Viv! Kids are SO funny like that…if I can’t see you than you can’t see me! 🙂

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  11. brenda w says:
    June 16, 2012 at 14:14

    Sweet with truth…I like what you’ve done here, Viv!

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  12. awriterweavesatale says:
    June 16, 2012 at 13:57

    cute!!

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  14. jesterqueen (@jesterqueen) says:
    June 16, 2012 at 13:03

    Maybe next week it will be a pony! With a little kid, anything is possible.

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  16. adinparadise says:
    June 16, 2012 at 09:08

    Very cute, Viv. 😉 Have a great weekend.

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