This is the second of my borrowed first line poems – this time borrowed from Charles Causley.
I am the song that sings that little bird—
the one just there, the brown one, yellow wings;
the sweetest music I have ever heard.
I am the song that sings a little bird,
the notes so pure, yet trilling. It’s absurd
how hard to quell the sadness when I sing
that lovely song that sings a little bird
to please me, that brown one with yellow wings.
Loosely linked to Margo Roby’s Imagistic Prompt
This is so happy; I’m smiling!
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This is lovely Viv; really pretty.
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I love this, Viv. And I really liked your response to one of the comments about it being a happy accident. More than once, I’ve been in the middle of a comment on someone’s blog, and realized that the words I was typing were a poem being born. Most of what I write is a happy accident.
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This is so lovely…I enjoy birds so much. We have a Mourning Dove Mama nesting on our front porch and saw the first oriole of the season at our oriole feeder just a few moments ago. :0)
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lovely bird song poem-you always bring up the unique style which is thoroughly enjoyable
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Oy! I love this. As Misky says, charming, but a little something more. Quite lovely, ViV
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One of those happy accidents, Margo. I’d finished the first exercise ahead of time. We’d been talking about triolets and this one popped into my head in about 3 minutes.
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A very charming little piece that really made me smile … which I really need with this drip-drip-drip miserable weather we’re having.
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ain’t we just!
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