Another world is the world of dreams
where nothing can be quite what it seems,
reality smashed to smithereens.
Take your head from the sand,
wake up and stir the blood in your veins.
Now your world will expand.
http://djvorreyer.wordpress.com/2011/12/17/poetry-tow-truck-51-aliens-exist/ prompts us to look at other worlds and aliens. I combined my pragmatic approach to that with the proposal at http://withrealtoads.blogspot.com/?zx=b5584de227c1b80e
to write a Burns stanza à la Ode to a Mouse
x x x x x x x a
x x x x x x x a
x x x x x x x a
x x x x x b
x x x x x x x a
x x x x x b
a lot that can happen in our world of dreams, and brought into our waking hours can expand our reality…
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yes, people do need to take their heads out of the sand at this point
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Great job combining the prompts – and I like the idea that what is alien to us expands our world.
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Indeed it will, Viv. Well said.
Pamela
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Nice take on the prompt without resorting to little grey men; and brava for combining two of them. 🙂
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It stanza lone without any help from poetic addresses to small rodents!
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😀
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Your combination of ideas has produced a strong stanza, in form and content.
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