To be going on with

Posted on June 27, 2012 by https://vivinfrance.wordpress.com

 

A glint of sunlight
fights a losing battle
with a bank of cloud

A raw swirling wind
clears its throat for fiercer blow.
Is this flaming June?

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6 Responses to To be going on with

  1. purplepeninportland says:
    July 5, 2012 at 00:11

    `bank of cloud’ and `wind clears its throat’ – Beautiful imagery, Viv.

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  2. markwindham says:
    June 27, 2012 at 21:57

    flaming indeed. calling for 104f here on Saturday.

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    • vivinfrance says:
      June 28, 2012 at 05:46

      We have been hovering between 50 and 60 F here for weeks. They’re promising us the dizzy heights of 69F at the weekend. I might take a layer off – on the other hand, I may not.

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  3. Misky says:
    June 27, 2012 at 07:46

    More like June down under …

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  4. Tilly Bud says:
    June 27, 2012 at 07:28

    Perfect description. What happened to global warming?

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