haibun re-visited

Posted on September 23, 2010 by https://vivinfrance.wordpress.com

Thanks to national strike
ferry cancelled fruitless trip
home again frustrated

I’ll now re-write yesterday’s over-optimistic travelogue.

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13 Responses to haibun re-visited

  1. Uma Gowrishankar says:
    September 26, 2010 at 16:54

    OMG, what an end ! Perfect haiku Viv.

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  2. Tumblewords says:
    September 26, 2010 at 04:34

    Darn. I hate when that happens – except it makes for a strong haiku!

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  3. wayne says:
    September 25, 2010 at 23:00

    nicely done Viv…..thanks for sharing

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  4. Julie Jordan Scott says:
    September 25, 2010 at 18:11

    Ohhh, this makes me smile. I know the feeling you evoked here. I look forward to reading more….

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  5. EKSwitaj says:
    September 25, 2010 at 18:10

    Oh no! But at least you got a poem from it.

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  6. wysfool says:
    September 25, 2010 at 04:04

    I like the original ending. It was a fine arc, and I don’t mind that the projection was wrong (sorry for you, of course)

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  7. 1sojournal says:
    September 25, 2010 at 00:19

    Sorry for all the vexation, talk about hurry up and wait. Hopefully the actual trip will be better, and I love the quilt. Love the haibun as well.

    Elizabeth

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  8. Happy Flower says:
    September 24, 2010 at 19:47

    O drat. Sorry trip cancelled.

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  9. Diane Truswell says:
    September 24, 2010 at 19:23

    How frustrating! Mind you, you wrote a perfect haiku!

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  10. Mary says:
    September 24, 2010 at 18:32

    What a disappointment to be so ready and then unable to go!

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  11. systematicweasel says:
    September 24, 2010 at 16:28

    Indeed it is a perfect end, short and excellent continuation! =)

    -Weasel

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  12. Someone Is Special says:
    September 23, 2010 at 16:39

    Lovely Haiku.. A perfect end..

    –Someone Is Special–

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  13. Tilly Bud says:
    September 23, 2010 at 11:49

    A perfect end to an imperfect day.

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