Anse Baleine
The housing lady told me it wouldn’t do ─
far too small, not posh enough.
I mean, dear, it’s only a little flat.
But the first time I saw it
I was hooked.
I stood on the balcony outside,
peered across minimalist decor
to the Indian Ocean sparkling
through louvred windows opposite
Wide folding doors joined bed
and living rooms
into one great party space,
clean and bright with sparse furnishings –
beds, table, two wooden-armchairs,
concrete shelves pretending to be a fitted kitchen.
Flimsy print curtains with mason wasp nests clinging behind
couldn’t hide the theatre beyond ─
turquoise backdrop,
wings of casuarina trees,
coconut palms and Calice du Pape.
Centre stage a tiny beach
with whale-shaped rock that gave the bay its name.
A foreground pawpaw tree brushed
the little balcony,
where giant spider webs,
dutifully mopped up pesky flies.
Oh yes, it would do.
Written for dVerse Open Link Night – not so much a poem, more a happy memory
Viv! Such a vivid picture you paint.
Don’t you have enough poems about your time there for a themed collection? I’d like to read that.
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More prose than poetry.
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You could combine the two; or rewrite some of your prose as poetry…
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Never mind space – it’s place that counts!
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This sounds like a lovely place! I too would have said the place would do just fine. Anything for that view. Excellent poem and a great peep into you.
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oooh, you really lived here! 🙂 Any spot with a view of the sea would do for me too! 🙂 Lovely description — I’m right there with you. Isn’t that just the wonderful thing about words and writing poetry/stories/a journal? It can all come tumbling back 🙂
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Indeed. I was happy all day after writing that, back in Seychelles and revelling in the life there
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Looks and sounds like heaven – it seems the flat was perfect for the setting and the lifestyle. You do an excellent job of capturing the allure and the psychological space available through simplicity and openness.
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Thank you Anna – those 2 years were the highspot of our lives.
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It looks to be a nice little pad Viv! Go for it. Nothing like having a great view!
Hank
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Wonderful write, Viv. I can see the place so clearly.
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Sounds just perfect, except for the wasps. 🙂
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They weren’t a problem – their sculpted mud nests were on the back of the curtains and the wasps never came near us.
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Haha. I’m glad to hear it. 🙂
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This is absolutely lovely, Viv ❤
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Well, you’ve given me another glimpse into my friend, Viv. I like the minimalist feel of this where it’s the outside that holds all the riches.
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Trust your gut I say ~ If you love it, then go for it ~
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I know this feeling, Viv. Even though it’s a temporary home, you know it will always feel like a home. You feel it in your heart.
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what a wonderful place… it sounds like a dream.. I would say it’s the view and a balcony that makes all the difference… it will do indeed.(I actually wanted to walk barefoot after reading your poem)
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We lived barefoot, or at most in flip-flops – hard surfaces were too hot for barefoot.
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Oh Viv, despite being able to visualise very, very clearly the light, colour, sounds and smells, to almost feel the heat and hear the wind clatter in the palms and sigh in the casuarinas, I do wish there was a picture… Somehow when nature is so resplendent outside, you don’t need a lot of glamour inside, do you?
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I’ll have to rummage in the tatty cardboard box which is our picture album, but I have a feeling the pictures got spoiled in a rainstorm.
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Ah well. I can mentally conjure the turquoise water and screaming pink bougainvillea… Perhaps Google Earth can produce current images for me 🙂
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Could find no pictures of the flat here, but there are lots of utube clips and pics on the web eg: http://en.seyvillas.com/html/mahe-beaches/anse-baleine?lang=en It looks as though the whale rock has broken up – maybe in the tsunamiin 2004
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Thanks, I’ll go and take a look.
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“Une longue plage de sable blanc et fin. Une mer calme, turquoise, avec quelques effets plus sombres, une vue à vous couper le souffle avec, vers le large ces vagues venant se briser sur une des rares barrières de corail de la Martinique.” What a delight!
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Where did that come from? The coral reef was visible and audible from the flat. Anse Baleine is a small cove, but there were plenty of others that matched your lovely French poem.
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And it seems to be quite hard to reach, so must have have been wonderfully private 🙂
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except for the other tenants of the block of 6 flats it was, and not everyone was prepared to scramble down those rocks!
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