I had a first line in my head,
went to write it but it had fled.
I looked at the sky
and wondered why
this poet’s still lounging in bed.
Get up and get out, I said.
Put something real in my head.
See life in the raw
then write what I saw,
an adventurous poem instead.
for Elizabeth Crawford whose story this morning reminded me of a song which Lisa Minelli belted out in Cabaret, “What good is sitting alone in your room….”
What a fun poem. You take a negative and turn it positive. 😉
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Love it, ViV! ❤
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There are very few, maybe even no blogs whose comments I read, except yours dear Viv. What a great bunch of followers are here.
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And I really appreciate them.
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Been happening an awful lot lately. Wake up to a line, get up, walk to office, sit down and nothing. It’s gone. Maybe leave a notebook by my bed?
Elizabeth
http://soulsmusic.wordpress.com
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bedside notebook mandatory, and some weird things are written in it. But I write very little on paper.
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I so love this!Especially the beginning which I relate to only too well. Smiles.
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This happens to me so often…especially in the middle of the night. I awaken with a “brilliant” idea and “poof”, it’s gone in the morning.
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Yes, often I must take the same self-advice. Sometimes I’m “lucky” and the insects visit me indoors…a tiny, ant, spider or weevil will sometimes enthuse the muse. 🙂
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I love lingering in bed in the morning. Our room is on a second story, and the head of our bed looks out windows onto our bird feeder. It’s a lovely set up and hard to get up some days. Coffee and the hope of a poem. 😉 Hope your day brings you joy, Viv.
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you too, Brenda.
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This happened to me the other night – I’m sleeping in the spare room because my coughing’s so bad and I forgot to take it with me! This poem’s like a limerick – love it!
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If lacking in words and inspiration: write a limerick. The rhyme pattern and metre are most helpful!
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I so relate to the first two lines. I can forget what I got up for between the foot and the top of the stairs… Love the form of this poem too!
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Infuriating when by the time one is able to commence writing, the idea has done a bunk. You know it was there, but not what it was. How does a mind work like that – remembering there was something to remember but forgetting the something? Better to forget there ever was such an inspiration!
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🙂
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Great, I know how the lines come at night and then forgotten!
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