We used to stand in a circle and talk
at the end of every working day,
telling those tall tales of hope
and making drippy jokes
reluctant to leave,
to stem the flow
that makes us
into a
team.
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It was fun to see how few extra words I needed to use to make sense of the Wordle words, and some of those were there to form the shape. Not much of a poem, I admit! Do pop over to the Sunday Whirl, to see what others have done.
Wow! Great job on this, Viv!
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I like it, Viv… the words and how you’ve molded them!
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I haven’t tried one of those in ages. However I do remember working far from home and the natural conclusion to the working day was to meet up with my mates for a drink to unwind.
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Cheers! (Both ways,) This is in really good shape.
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I love the way this funnels. 🙂
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Great shape to this and nice economy of words.
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Salud!
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Santé
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Even the shape is reminiscent of a team emblem on a cheer shirt…..I love what you’ve done here 🙂
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I applaud you for your cleverness and creativity,
Elizabeth
http://soulsmusic.wordpress.com/
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That’s kind.
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Cin cin! Splendidly done!
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Brilliant. The shape along with the words reminded me of going to the pub with colleagues after work!
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Ah! Very clever, Viv. Cheers!
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I love fun stuff like this, where words make shapes for the eyes as well as for the imagination.
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Aha – love the glass shape – and the reminiscing and togetherness of this poem
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Well done!
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