Hiatus Haiku

Posted on March 30, 2016 by https://vivinfrance.wordpress.com

rescued daffs 27.3.16

I’m falling down on my resolution to post at least a haiku every day, which doesn’t bode well for Napowrimo.  Having written next to nothing for the last couple of days, these 17 syllables are hardly great productivity!   The daffs were rescued from a pot on the patio when storm Katie became too wild on Saturday.

Energy gap shows
lackadaisical effect
of Spring fever

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10 Responses to Hiatus Haiku

  1. katechiconi says:
    March 30, 2016 at 22:38

    be tranquil, dear Viv
    this promise to yourself is
    meant to encourage…

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  2. Victoria C. Slotto says:
    March 30, 2016 at 19:31

    Isn’t spring fever ironic–just when we need the energy for cleaning, gardening, playing…?

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  3. Crowing Crone Joss says:
    March 30, 2016 at 16:06

    maybe you need a few day’s breather before hitting th!e deck on April 1st

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  4. Hannah Gosselin says:
    March 30, 2016 at 15:54

    I think it’s perfect…the ebb and flow of writing is natural…you really brought a lot of haiku this month so the small break may be just what was needed to hit April the way you’d like. Beautiful Daffodils you rescued! 🙂

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  5. Misky says:
    March 30, 2016 at 15:30

    I find haiku very difficult, so personally, I think you’ve done brilliantly this month.

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