Wordle 242

Posted on March 13, 2016 by https://vivinfrance.wordpress.com

 

 

Listen to wise words ─ they can
transform the lives of dreamers
present them with an object, a goal,
until they flower and shine,
water the deserts and other arid places;
bring ease to the troubled,
soothe the sick and energize the weary.

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I seem to have lost the knack of wordles, and this was the best I could come up with.  It does at least use all the words!  Do go and see what others have made of it at Brenda’s Sunday Whirl   She herself has contributed an absolute cracker!

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20 Responses to Wordle 242

  1. purplepeninportland says:
    March 20, 2016 at 03:40

    I thought this was excellent writing, Viv!

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  2. The Laughing Housewife says:
    March 17, 2016 at 13:16

    You and all the words… You know how I feel about that!

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  3. The Writer's Village says:
    March 14, 2016 at 23:55

    We all have our days, our moments, our wishes for more creativity.
    It’s the writing that matters; the trying, the searching.
    I like your writing.
    Randy

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  4. brenda warren says:
    March 14, 2016 at 13:44

    Nice one, Viv! Thank you for allowing the words to sail into something positive. This is something I reflect on. We could all strengthen our spirits with this wisdom.

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  5. oldegg says:
    March 14, 2016 at 06:00

    I think you are worrying too much about prompt words for they are just that, a prompt to write and your reaction to them. It is how we react to your writing is far more important than ticking the words! Your piece was cogent and sympathetic and most importantly readable!

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  6. Shawna says:
    March 14, 2016 at 02:25

    So wise and inspirational. I’m definitely taking this to heart.

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  7. 1sojournal says:
    March 14, 2016 at 00:17

    1. You used the words well.
    2. Making a clear and understandable statement.
    3. of truth and wisdom
    4. We dreamers need just such encouragement.
    Thank you,

    Elizabeth

    Breathing Lesson

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  8. colonialist says:
    March 13, 2016 at 22:32

    *accusingly* And now you’ve got ME doing it!

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  9. colonialist says:
    March 13, 2016 at 21:15

    Good one, using all words. I thought you’d left off ‘transform’, but I missed seeing it sneak in in line 2!

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  10. Victoria C. Slotto says:
    March 13, 2016 at 20:45

    I really liked the brevity and, of course, related to that brevity.

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  11. markwindham says:
    March 13, 2016 at 14:50

    So many who claim to desire knowledge and growth are incapable of doing this simple thing…listen. A challenge of my own at times.

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  12. Misky says:
    March 13, 2016 at 12:21

    In my opinion, you’ve not lost your knack for wordles. I like your poem. >

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  13. Jae Rose says:
    March 13, 2016 at 11:14

    You haven’t lost the knack! This is concise and wise poem where the prompt words seem to fall into place perfectly

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  14. katechiconi says:
    March 13, 2016 at 10:32

    Can’t see anything at all wrong with this! There’s no sense at all that you’ve shoehorned the words together, and the meaning is unforced. Good one!

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