Wordle 242

 

 

Listen to wise words ─ they can
transform the lives of dreamers
present them with an object, a goal,
until they flower and shine,
water the deserts and other arid places;
bring ease to the troubled,
soothe the sick and energize the weary.

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I seem to have lost the knack of wordles, and this was the best I could come up with.  It does at least use all the words!  Do go and see what others have made of it at Brenda’s Sunday Whirl   She herself has contributed an absolute cracker!

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20 Responses to Wordle 242

  1. I thought this was excellent writing, Viv!

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  2. You and all the words… You know how I feel about that!

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  3. We all have our days, our moments, our wishes for more creativity.
    It’s the writing that matters; the trying, the searching.
    I like your writing.
    Randy

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  4. Nice one, Viv! Thank you for allowing the words to sail into something positive. This is something I reflect on. We could all strengthen our spirits with this wisdom.

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  5. oldegg says:

    I think you are worrying too much about prompt words for they are just that, a prompt to write and your reaction to them. It is how we react to your writing is far more important than ticking the words! Your piece was cogent and sympathetic and most importantly readable!

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  6. Shawna says:

    So wise and inspirational. I’m definitely taking this to heart.

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  7. 1sojournal says:

    1. You used the words well.
    2. Making a clear and understandable statement.
    3. of truth and wisdom
    4. We dreamers need just such encouragement.
    Thank you,

    Elizabeth
    https://soulsmusic.wordpress.com/2016/03/13/breathing-lesson/

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  8. colonialist says:

    *accusingly* And now you’ve got ME doing it!

    Liked by 1 person

  9. colonialist says:

    Good one, using all words. I thought you’d left off ‘transform’, but I missed seeing it sneak in in line 2!

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  10. I really liked the brevity and, of course, related to that brevity.

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  11. markwindham says:

    So many who claim to desire knowledge and growth are incapable of doing this simple thing…listen. A challenge of my own at times.

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  12. Misky says:

    In my opinion, you’ve not lost your knack for wordles. I like your poem. >

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  13. Jae Rose says:

    You haven’t lost the knack! This is concise and wise poem where the prompt words seem to fall into place perfectly

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  14. katechiconi says:

    Can’t see anything at all wrong with this! There’s no sense at all that you’ve shoehorned the words together, and the meaning is unforced. Good one!

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