Morning haiku

A blanket of fog
covers the tranquil landscape ─
hides progress of Spring


pallid sunlight
vaguely illumines the field —
Spring is hesitant

continuing my windup towards Napowrimo next month


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4 Responses to Morning haiku

  1. This describes Spring well….hesitant. The season that never seems sure of herself!

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  2. Been there, seen that!

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  3. I love your observations in haiku, Viv…sweet sips of your day…thank you!!

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