Woodland senryu


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An ocean of green
shadowy depths ─ through which float
islands of sunlight

Deepest forest
clouded by the breath of trees —
small creatures creep

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7 Responses to Woodland senryu

  1. you captured the feel of the woods so well.

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  2. Thanks so much for the woodland senryu dedication – I love woodlands (maybe not the mosquitoes) can’t wait until everything is green & lush again.
    Goofed up on a triangle, had to make all the other triangles smaller. Not a happy bunch.

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  3. ‘islands of sunlight’ – lovely!

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  4. Misky says:

    Gosh, that’s gorgeous, Viv. >

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  5. tialys says:

    Aaah! It almost makes me want to go and pitch a tent there and spend a few days relaxing. I did say ‘almost’ – I hate camping really 😉

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