Senryu 4

image from Pinterest uncredited

Gritty residue
evaporated puddle
of  oily rainbow


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4 Responses to Senryu 4

  1. Hmmm–I thought it was a close-up of a ceramic piece. How can something so dreadful be so beautiful?

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  2. tialys says:

    Love your description!

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  3. katechiconi says:

    I’ve always found it strange that polluting oil-slicks on the road can be so beautiful. Nature creates a mélange more beautiful than any artist could achieve.

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