Rain

 

This winter is the pits.  Where are the lovely sharp sunshiny frosty mornings?  Must we suffer only rain, incessant, interminable, smothering all interest in going outside to enjoy a bracing walk.  Crisp outlines of trees are nowhere to be seen ─ just misty, murky amorphous landscape, curtained intermittently by sweeping squalls.  It isn’t even cold.

Soporific rain
produces open-mouthed snores
from bored sufferer

My second attempt at a haibun for dVerse Haibun Monday, this time on prompt, writing to the photograph provided by Gabriella.  Sorry about the surfeit of adjectives!

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39 Responses to Rain

  1. I had to chuckle at “It isn’t even cold”. So true…if it’s going to be dreary, let there be snow!

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  2. lynn__ says:

    Oh dear, sounds gloomy indeed. Whoever wrote “whatever the weather, we’ll weather the weather, whether we like it or not” ?! Hope you see the sun soon…and more than tremulous 🙂

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  3. Bastet says:

    My winter is different this year .. but how I remember those soggy winters on the Italian Riviera … totally disheartening – totally melancholy – although I lived in a villa overlooking the sea and loved when the squalls pounded the bay. You’ve described it very well in your haibun! Sorry the weather is so miserable though.

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  4. SMiLes.. i suppose
    A first poem..
    inspiRed iN
    Cave oN
    Cold Winter
    day..

    Writing
    SinGs
    Coldbound..:)

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  5. Snakypoet (Rosemary Nissen-Wade) says:

    (Laugh.) Yes, it can get like that! Ours here is monsoonal, lately. At last we get gaps in between.

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  6. Sherry Marr says:

    LOL, I hear you….endless grey here too….but we have green things poking up in the garden!

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  7. Gabriella says:

    I hate that kind of winters. I remember such a mild and rainy winter a few years ago. I was so longing for cold and some blue in the sky.

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  8. colonialist says:

    Not exactly a shower of praise for rain! And here we are longing for the stuff. The more the merrier.

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  9. I can feel the rain seeping into your brain.. c

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  10. Suzanne says:

    I love your haiku. It sums up the feeling of being trapped by incessant rain beautifully. I am trying to reply to your comments on my blog but my tablet is having a hissy fit. I will reply later when I am on the computer.

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  11. Grace says:

    Rain and dreary rain, smiles ~ At least better than covered in snow ~

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  12. I can’t imagine having constant rain like that…brings back memories of Brittany!

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  13. we are entering Rainy Season down here, although so far, it’s been mostly sunny. We had so much rain, last Spring, in Nova Scotia, I swear we were growing mold on our backsides!

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  14. trishwrites1 says:

    ditto on what is up with winter!

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  15. Here in southern Ontario Canada is it cold at 0 C but yesterday was almost spring like and melted most of the snow. Our weather mish mash this year is a frittata of sorts. I think

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  16. Misky says:

    We have sun today, so you can live in hope of a wind in your direction. 🙂 >

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  17. whimsygizmo says:

    “misty, murky”…”sweeping squalls” — your word choices here are spot on, conveying the gloom you feel.

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  18. We had a few weeks with wonderful winter… and here it’s not even raining… just the grey of persistent dusk…

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  19. I love this! Describes exactly how I’m feeling today. It’s showery so I have to take a chance and walk the dogs, but I know we’ll be caught in it once we’re out.

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  20. Mary says:

    You have captured the season so very well here, Viv. I call it mid-winter blahs. Nice haibun.

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  21. My sentiments exactly. We are FINALLY getting a cold and dry snap.

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  22. katechiconi says:

    Drumming on the roof / gurgling in the gutters / reason to rejoice.

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  23. we don’t have rain this morning but the wind is horrendous and people are getting blown over

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