image from sci-toys.com
A Microscopic Drop in the Ocean
Our wide world is just a drop in the ocean,
a punctuation mark in creation.
A zoom lens powers in
with vertigo-inducing speed
from the vast outer void
through space
past planets
oceans
seas
swoops over earthly terrain
to observe the anthill
of a rush hour
city street
lingers over a hair on the head
of a lonely homeless man
focuses on a grain
of sand
hovers over forest plummets to earth
over trees, plants and animals
insects swarming infesting;
contracts to a single
microscopic
dot
.
Octpowrimo 24 (prompt from yesterday)
I LOVE that second line!
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Rarely read such a well-defined observation of our true place in the overall real.
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Thank you Ron.
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love the shape this poem takes – perfect drops
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end in a dot; very nicely crafted
have a good Sayurday
much love…
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This is simply marvellous … loved the post and the form!
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Wow! This is clever! 🙂 I’m impressed.
6WS not up yet. Hoping Cate hasn’t let the anxiety take over. 😦
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It’s up now
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Thanks, Viv 🙂
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Just checked. That’s last week’s you’ve signed into, Viv. About her anxiety 😦
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Oh dear. I’d better try again!
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Oh this is very effective!
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That puts us firmly in our place in the cosmic scheme of things!
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