Amid the darkness
a lost love found me,
waiting like a lioness
under a lone streetlight.
Images of you flood my mind.
Craving the fluidity of your presence,
I reject the tangibility of lost love
in favour of a found shadow.
The heart complicates
the simplest things.
Anthony Desmond is leaving the poets’ pub dVerse team to concentrate on publishing, and leaves us a cracker of a prompt to go out with a bang! He gives us 8 of his own lines, from which we are to choose 3 to include in a poem. Ever the rebel, I used bits of 7 of them but not one complete line – here they are:-
Flood me like a lone streetlight amongst the darkness
Craved images of you
A lost love found me, in you
Like a lioness with belladonna in her eyes
shooting eggs with guns
Fluidity of your presence
Shade like shadow
The heart makes the simplest things so damn complicated
Nice! I love it when you rebel.
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Hey hey now… very clever to pick apart the lines, I dig!
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Chimera is really beautiful, Viv. 🙂
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I reject the tangibility of lost love
in favour of a found shadow…..that’s wonderful and the last line is a really good ending.
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I never thought of picking up words ~ I specially like:
I reject the tangibility of lost love
in favour of a found shadow.
I like how you made the lines yours Viv ~ Thanks for playing along ~
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For me, I like the way you’ve remixed and created the statement in the last two lines. Nice work!
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Bravissimo! Love how you pulled out parts of the lines to use. Lines 7 and 8 just leap out of the poem.
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Kudos for putting the stamp of your own individuality on this piece; I did not have the courage to dissect & cherry-pick the sentences; yours shines like fresh wax.
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I’m happy to see someone else who used a bit of poetic license with the given lines that seemed to make it all come together so well.
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Tight piece, well done.
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Thank GOD for the
rebels the really
so-called
crazy
ones who
WiLL challenge
the pre-conceived
order.. sMILES..:)
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Oh this is so true.. our feelings often mess things up for sure.
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Oh, this reads very well. I like it, Viv. >
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I particularly like your version of the final statement. Succinct, and true!
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