WORRISOME WORDLE 213

A superior being has chiselled away at me
leaving a hollow space with no words,
no rhythm, no poetry,
nothing but puzzles.
My feckless muse is dumb
having lost lucidity
to a perplexing foreign tongue
in a struggle to make sense
of this luminous sunrise
staining the sky with flame.


photo by No.1 son Robin Smith, taken from our previous house

Others will have made more sense of this bunch of disconnected words at the Sunday Whirl

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9 Responses to WORRISOME WORDLE 213

  1. Since I have no poetic bones and know absolutely nothing about it, I will just say, good job. 🙂

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  2. thehutts says:

    Watch this history of Bahamas music and it might bring back the sound and rythmn!

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  3. restlessjo says:

    I think you made a good job of it 🙂

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  4. rosross says:

    Really beautiful and soulful.

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  5. whimsygizmo says:

    Love the sound bumps here, Viv. This is fun to read aloud.

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  6. annell4 says:

    You did a wonderful job with the words….I had a hard time with them…

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  7. You did pretty well in your muses absence! Love your poem, especially the last two lines.
    Visit my Sunday Whirl post!

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