FEEL THE MORNING
I wake at dawn to the sound of lapping water,
the pungent scent of river mud,
stick my head out of the tent flap
to watch the peaceful Thames.
A hatch of midges dances erratically,
catches the first rays of the sun.
Eyelevel grasses glisten with dew
as silvered cobwebs join green blades in lethal network.
Lazily I roll over, yawn and stretch.
A cacophony of birdsong separates into distinct sounds:
trills, squeaks, coos of wood pigeons, chattering chaffinches,
melodies in harmony and à capella airs.
The siren song of the river beats at my will
until I squirm out of my sleeping bag and pull on yesterday’s clothes.
Bare feet cringe in cold, wet grass,
mud squidges between my toes.
I push the dinghy with a rasping rattle until it floats,
clamber in as the current takes hold,
drift peacefully
past pollarded willows.
Stubby trunks support an effusion of shaving brush fronds.
A pair of swans glides past – four cygnets in line astern.
I spy a gaggle of fluffy baby moorhens under the bank,
the triangles of their parents’ upturned tails nearby.
A silent shadow swoops above, neck tucked in,
as the heron searches intently for breakfast
in murky green water.
I am content.
from A Prompt Each Dag
Euphoria
This morning the sun said yes to the fog
and the river said thank you
for the chance to sparkle and glisten.
Listen.
From the valley a blue updraft
of dust and seeds and wings
carries music and optimism.
Birds on a wire add sweet voices
to the refrain.
A grey bird turns yellow
in the sun, as a small miracle
of light bathes the field in gold.
Fold me up and leave me
to gather dust in that clover patch
of euphoria outside infinity.
Today is just such a day, and I couldn’t choose between these two poems for the last day of #30dayswild, so I give you both.
Oooh, a double-coupon day, how lovely! Both are wonderful poems.
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Absolutely glorious!
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These made my day, Viv. So beautifully and descriptively given…felt like I was there. 🙂
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I itched at the midges, Viv. I also like your morning feeling!
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Beautiful poetry!
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I can do without shoes… and mud.
I’m not a happy camper. I’m not sure what changed, as I do remember not being bothered so much by the thought of camping as a child. I think my body chemistry changed. And bugs now like to eat me, and too many plants don’t like me either.
I do like both of your poems. They take us to quite contemplative places with nature.
It has been a blast this month with Q. I’m not sure if I’m going to do the Daily with Phoenix Rising. I’m not particularly fond of the set up for comments there. I like people to come to my place and leave comments. And I am not particularly thrilled at leaving whole pieces in the comment section either. But I might do one or two… As they say; Never say never.
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Phoenix Rising’s ancestor, Poetic Bloomings was more about putting the poems in the comments, which rather precludes submission to journals or competition.
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But then the preclusion of submission… doesn’t that also apply to most of what we put on our blogs?
Good thing I don’t write to be recognized professionally… yet 😉
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Sometimes it does and sometimes it doesn’t. I do make some of my posts private or remove them altogether if I want to submit.
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Interesting… But can’t ‘they’ still be found even when you remove them? Nothing seems to ever vanish completely on the net. Except that which you don’t want to loose. I know a couple of folks who lost everything – just *poof* no back up.
Which is why I write everything on my own word-processing space and then copy and paste.
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Thank you for your gift of two lovely poems 🙂
I love the first stanza in particular of Euphoria.
A hatch of midges – is that a real collective noun or did you make it up? It’s fantastic.
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Not a collective noun (so far as I know) but an event – midges tend to hatch more or less simultaneously, in large numbers, usually around dawn and dusk.
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I prefer the second one – mostly because I hate camping and the ‘mud squidges between my toes’ line reminded me just how much ‘)
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I have camped solo and en famille for most of my life, and revel in the feel of mud between my toes! Even now, I wear shoes as little as possible.
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Viv, both are awesome.
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Wonderful! Both are treasures.
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For me, the second one is beautiful. Thanks, Viv!
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