Napowrimo 28 – Surrealism

Image by Tess Photography

Tit for tat –
I took her head
she took mine back.
She spoiled my dinner
leaving  me with no mouth.

I really can’t abide the  surreal.
What’s wrong with really real?

For Mindlove miserys menagerie Photo Prompt


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8 Responses to Napowrimo 28 – Surrealism

  1. Great poem and fun photo.

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  2. Oh Man! Blew me away Vivian! For a couple of months now I’ve been trying to simplify my own poetry and i just realized that this, this wonderful poem is what I am trying to achieve! Love this – shocking – whimsical – unexpected – took total control of my entire attention!

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  3. colonialist says:

    The picture resolutely refuses to reveal itself, so maybe I miss a point or two. Enjoyed, nonetheless!

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  4. Ron. says:



  5. Wow that’s twisted and I love where your poetry took this, Viv!

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  6. Léa says:

    While I enjoyed the poem, I do love Dali! 🙂

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