Napowrimo 24 – senryu unmasked

for  Heeding haiku, who would like us to pretend.

Live at one remove:
exist through a viewfinder
to protect  from hurt.

Or

Take off the veneer,
dive into reality –
live life unashamed

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5 Responses to Napowrimo 24 – senryu unmasked

  1. Ah. What a choice! I wonder how many make the right choice for themselves. The answer is different for everyone. Wise and thoughtful writing. 🙂
    -HA

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  2. colonialist says:

    I suppose most of us tend to dive from viewfinder to reality and back – which is fine, if balanced!

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  3. Viv, you took the form and ran with it. Two aspects of the same premise here, and both are strong. I am a girl who likes keeping those options open, but here, I will always choose your second take on life… Amy

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  4. Your closing line resonates with me – it speaks of such a freedom. Thought-provoking pieces, Viv. 🙂

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  5. Ron. says:

    Like most (I suppose), I like to think I’m living in your 2nd senryu, but I’m probably more often doing the 1st.
    Great stuff, V.

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