NapoWrimo Day 2 … Forewarned


Clouds whip by at speed
as if the sky-plug has been removed.
Fledgling tree sways alarmingly.
The day promises turbulence.
Retreat inward
hunker down


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5 Responses to NapoWrimo Day 2 … Forewarned

  1. The closing in feeling echoed in the shape of your poem is perfect, Viv! Brilliant. 🙂


  2. colonialist says:

    I love that sky-plug image!

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  3. catterel says:

    Lovely imagery 🙂

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  4. Ron. says:

    Regardless of weather, these days most days promise turbulence, eh? Best chance for survival: retreat / hunker / endure. Great work, V.

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  5. tialys says:

    I’m not keen on this windy weather either. It’s not even good for drying the laundry – too strong. It seems to have subsided a bit here now but perhaps I shouldn’t speak too soon.

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