Snapshots

 

All the fun of the fair
the noise, the smells, the spills
the fear – that wheel soars  high,
but I want to go there.

*

Clanking dodgems crash
and grind, provoking squeals
from inept drivers
taking revenge

*

Candy floss beards
sticky little hands
roll pennies down a slot to lose
and tears roll down  cheeks.

*

Swaggering beer-fuelled boastful blokes
pick up lethal weapons
to fire at and miss the targets,
failing to win the teddy bear.

*

Games of chance and games of skill
carousel horses and what you will
mud and squalor but beauty still –
that’s the fun of the fair.

A rather uimaginative contribution to Gay Reiser Cannon’s delicious prompt for dVerse Meeting the Bar.   Some poets have come out of the two months of poem a day challenges writing out of their skins.  I am not one of them.

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17 Responses to Snapshots

  1. Sumana Roy says:

    such enjoyable lines..

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  2. Oh yes, that’s the fun of the fair! Well captured.

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  3. Mary says:

    You have captured all the fun of the fair, Viv! I love the smells, the tastes, but I can do without the fears. Smiles. And, if you can believe it, I have never tried my hand at winning a teddy bear!!

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  4. Glenn Buttkus says:

    So very spot on for the fair moments, giving us the poet’s eye view of the smells, sights, & folks who gather there, at the fair, if they had the fare to travel there. Big county & state fairs are part Car shows, carnivals, rodeos, & new merchandise shows, punctuated by gardeners & BBQ sellers; this conglomerate of all rolled up onto one spot for a week or so; a big deal. Loved your take on it.

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  5. Bishop says:

    First one of the mix on this prompt where I heard the calliope playing (a memory of the Golden Horseshoe City Fair I attended as a youth). Awesome work to have a poem pull melodymemory out of my brain.

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  6. You capture the magic in your inimitable way. I was taken there – so much to see and do at the fair!

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  7. tigerbrite says:

    You describe the fair just as I remember it:)

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  8. billgncs says:

    I loved fairs as a kid, and still do.

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  9. Oh yeah it did get nasty when it rained. Forgot about those few times. My fav of course cotton candy. So nicely put together just flowed right through. Like a wave.

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  10. Reminds me of my childhood.

    If you’re poemed out, take a break 🙂

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  11. I love the beer blokes competing for a teddy bear.. just the type of craziness I would expect from a fair..

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  12. brian miller says:

    you capture a bit of the fun and chaos that is the fair….i remember cleaning up the day after a fair once….the magic was gone and there was mud and tons of trash…

    take a deep breath…ha…that is why i have not done them the last couple years

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  13. Sabio Lantz says:

    Fun picture poem — stirred great memories. Well done

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  14. Misky says:

    Loved the first one, Viv.

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  15. MarinaSofia says:

    I know what you mean by ‘all written out’ – I find participating in challenges like that sucks me dry of inspiration too.
    However, I do like your contribution – short, sharp, evocative enumeration of the trials and tribulations of the fairs – but also what makes them childishly fun!

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