OctPo Day 29 – history of love

The honeymoon was over
What did I discover?
Chatty, became morose
Passionate became cold
Fascinating became boring
Love had been blind.

Other interpretations of the prompt here

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9 Responses to OctPo Day 29 – history of love

  1. Rod E. Kok says:

    Sad piece, but very well done.

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  2. Misky says:

    How very sad … >

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  3. Cindy says:

    Simple and direct, like a slap in the face. Excellent poem! 🙂

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  4. Yep, there’s always the honeymoon period…and reality sets in!

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  5. Fida says:

    I like the rhthym of this, how one feeling bounces off the other. Thanks for sharing.

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  6. Oh dear. I hope that’s either the first honeymoon or poetic licence?

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  7. wandapsycho says:

    It’s sad when that’s the truth.
    I tried to convince myself that my marriage was right. It never was, but I guess it had to be so I could have my kids, whom I wouldn’t trade for anything.
    http://poetryofthenetherworld.blogspot.com/2014/10/octpowrimo-2014-day-29.html

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