Wilting, unloved
waiting for rescue by
tenderness unleashed

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5 Responses to OctPo 28 HUNGER

  1. I love this. “Tenderness unleased” is brilliant


  2. Perfect word to describe that feeling, “wilting…” nicely captured in brevity, Viv.


  3. This is such a lovely poem Viv


  4. Rod E. Kok says:

    This is beautiful, Viv.


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