With aching body and burning eyes
from too much reading, seek repose.
Pillows thumped and shoulders hunched,
lamp extinguished, darkness soothes.
The world retreats, oblivion beckons.
Dreams approach with every second.
A new world appears, fantastic scenes
where I can fly to escape danger.
The gauze lifts, reveals the stranger
who’ll be adored as my destiny.
The scene shifts to domestic strife,
anxiety, tension and stress take over –
until a jerk hauls me back to life.
Morning brings my cup of tea,
a swift return to sanity,
and for a while, sweet sleep is gone.
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…and a new day begins, while dreams continue. Love this Viv.
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gauze lifts reminds me of a movie scene where someone got burned and then they lift the gauze off their eyes and they can see. also, there’s the famous twilight zone with Marilyn Monroe episode.
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I was thinking of a theatre, where there are several gauze drops, which change the scene every time onelifts, but I like your examples.
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sleep as a roller coaster ride..I bet you have amazing dreams..c
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Oh my goodness…this sounds just like me.
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