OctPo 22 – Lanterne

He
is my
foundation
and my desire
now.

He
keeps me
living and
relishing
life.

Poetic Bloomings gives the recipe for a Lanterne poem –  a five line unrhymed sentence poem of 1, 2, 3, 4 and 1 syllable lines – not as easy as it sounds, but I managed 2!

 

 

 

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8 Responses to OctPo 22 – Lanterne

  1. cecilia says:

    I really like this. The composition and the sentiment.. much love .. c

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  2. You brought such intimacy and meaning with these, Viv. Beautiful work. ♥

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  3. Misky says:

    Very nice.

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  4. Ron. says:

    New form for me; I’ll have to give it a go.
    And you did more than merely “manage” two–you nailed them! Very impressive.

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  5. granny1947 says:

    Great stuff….love poetry but have never attempted it myself.

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  6. Wonderful love poetry x

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