Red Wolf Wordle 23

It is a miracle
how birds produce fluty trills
from their tiny lungs,
a swallow sings the blues
in fear of  long migration ahead                                                       .
and a peacock screeches punk rock
from the highest branch –
his version of a lovesong for his shining hen.
A bizarre blend of musical vibrations.

 
I took liberties with the case of  some of the words., and I had one or two left over.   You’ll find more wordle poems here

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10 Responses to Red Wolf Wordle 23

  1. Colleen says:

    A symphony of trills and thrills.

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  2. I love changing the words up…it’s fun that way…I can nearly hear that boisterous peacock!

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  3. julespaige says:

    Fun to think of the peacock as a punk rocker 🙂
    Thanks for your visit and kind words.

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  4. Irene says:

    Wonderful vibrations of bird song you did. The punk rock peacock got me most.

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  5. Viv, I loved the peacock screeching punk rock! You’re right – everybody’s got their version of “the call,” and it’s amazing how many like-minded birds (and people) will answer! Thanks, Amy

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  6. take as many liberties as you will, we love to read you.

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  7. This is beautiful, Viv. “a swallow sings the blues and a peacock screeches punk rock” that is so right!

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  8. brian miller says:

    oh i am hanging out with the punk rock peacocks…smiles…
    its raining here today so the birds are a little quiet…apparently they dont sing
    in the shower

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  9. Misky says:

    Nicely done, Viv. And (btw) you’re supposed to ‘take liberties’ with the words. That’s the whole point of having fun with them. 😀

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  10. rosross says:

    Lovely liberties Viv.

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