A hatch of midges hovers in a cloud
above the Kielder Water at eventide.
Hungry for human blood they are avowed,
not to disperse until it is supplied.
Despite this hazard, hardy walkers crowd,
for the beauty of the lake can’t be denied.
As complex eco-systems demonstrate,
it’s nature’s way ever to compensate.
The Granada Camp for Wayward Poets prompt yesterday was for an Ottava Rima about a lake. Normally I love writing formal poetry, but this one nearly had me beat – it took all day, off and on, a line at a time. You can find a description of the form and some stunning poems here.
Some crazy guy swam it end to end yesterday 🙂
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Gosh – it’s very big and cold.
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And he was smiling when he climbed out! Like I said- crazy guy 🙂
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You did such a great job with the form, Viv. I think sometimes form poetry brings out the best in us. And those darn midges…just thinking of them makes me itch.
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In fact I was really rather ashamed of the poem! It felt forced.
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Just been posting about midges on Facebook. Smidge is my favoured remedy at the moment – great you-tube video here:
And more on the Midge Forecast can be found on the Smidge website:
http://midgeforecast.co.uk/
Thanks for a lovely poem about where I work.
Sally
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I’m glad it hit the spot!
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You’re on a roll, V. this is perfection. Love the rima!
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