Tilus

I quote from the prompt at dVerse Meeting the Bar:

Tilus [tee-loo-hz] is a form created by Kelvin S.M. and falls under the category of micro poetry. The form is divided into two parts: the first part is composed of two lines following a 6-3 syllable count; the second part, a one-syllable word to close and/or complete the subject layered in the first part. The whole piece must, only, contain 10 in overall syllable count. The main focus of Tilus is on the world of Nature, and how it can open a new door to a wider understanding of life and beyond. The form aims to be epic in emotions expressed, more importantly, than to be epic in words.

Uncountable species
found on earth

life

*

Flora and fauna in
abundance

rich

*

Today

The best day of the year
for sunshine

bliss

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21 Responses to Tilus

  1. Susan says:

    I like the bliss. Thank you.

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  2. kaykuala says:

    Very easy and friendly Tilus set Viv! Like the 3rd!

    Hank

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  3. Yousei Hime says:

    Loving all the micro poetry. 🙂 Your flora/fauna one reminded me of how deeply grateful I feel to be in nature. Thank you for sharing these.

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  4. kelvin s.m. says:

    Neat & simply beautiful takes on the form. You handled this form with such tenderness, thank you. Smiles.

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  5. Sumana Roy says:

    such beautiful images and blissful scenes…

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  6. Snakypoet (Rosemary Nissen-Wade) says:

    It’s wonderful how this little form can say so much!

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  7. wolfsrosebud says:

    do like that last one… bliss

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  8. Sweet! and wow!!! Your words brought me to think. I dig this poem of yours very much. 🙂

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  9. Ron. says:

    TrioTiluscious, V. Especially enjoyed the third.

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  10. colonialist says:

    Distresses to extreme
    it must seem,
    teem

    Complexities of scheme
    is the dream
    cream

    esteem

    Nature falls off the beam
    will that team
    scream

    (No, I won’t give up my day job.) 🙂

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  11. Bliss indeed! It’s so lovely to be warm….

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  12. You really got the nature/meaning aspect of this form, Viv. Great images with something to ponder.

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  13. Glenn Buttkus says:

    A triplet of Tilus; joyous, earthy, sensuous, calming; enjoyed our jaunt, and Tilus 1 grabbed my mind.

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  14. brian miller says:

    ha. glad you got to enjoy the sun…been sprinkling here all day
    and supposed to really pour tonight…like 4 inches of rain
    there is something pretty amazing
    to the abundance of differences in the animals as well

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  15. I love when the sun come out, I love the flora and fauna.. spring is bliss…

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  16. claudia says:

    oh i want some sunshine bliss as well.. we had lots of rains those last days… downpours in fact..ha but the good thing is the rain brings that flora and fauna come alive…

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