Napo day 23

Brevette = a three word poem:  noun v e r b noun for Creative Bloomings

 

brevity

s o o t h e s

impatience

*

impatience

p r o v o k e s

hypertension

*

hypertension

c a u s e s

strokes

*

strokes

c a l m

cats

 

I’ve written nothing of which I am at all proud during this cruel NaPoWriMo month, so I am linking this to dVerse Open Link Night.  At least it is brief!

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24 Responses to Napo day 23

  1. grapeling says:

    that twist is perfect 🙂 ~

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  2. ds says:

    Very clever! Oh, those cats. Thank you.

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  3. wolfsrosebud says:

    very cute… and that cat seems to have a lot of wisdom

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  4. ayala says:

    Clever 🙂

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  5. hypercryptical says:

    Brilliant – very clever and the close made me giggle. Love it!
    Anna :o]

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  6. Well that was just clever!

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  7. I like how cleverly you wrapped this up. Good use of words!

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  8. scotthastiepoet says:

    Clever stuff Viv – glad I stopped by tonight… With Best Wishes Scott http://www.scotthastie.com

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  9. The last line really got me! Thanks for the brevity and wit.

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  10. MarinaSofia says:

    Very enjoyable indeed – and the ending took me by surprise (although, knowing my cat, it shouldn’t have been). It sounded like you were going into a downward spiral and then… flash of humour!

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  11. Love the cleverness of this… like haiku but with even less restrictions…

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  12. Brevette – a form I hadn’t heard of before now. Well done, Viv – a challenge indeed!

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  13. tigerbrite says:

    Enjoyed this Viv, well done.

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  14. ha! I love how the strokes circle back to the cats. And yes, they certainly do relieve tension. Cleverly done!

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  15. jo-hanna says:

    brevette, what a lovely name for a form.
    And I’m sure for most napowrimos brevity is a blessing now we are nearing the end.

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  16. Beth Winter says:

    I think this is brilliant! The cat was a happy surprise at the end.

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  17. it may be brief but it is wonderfully playful and much enjoyed.

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  18. claudia says:

    haha – very cool – strokes calm cats… i’m rather an impatient person but shhhh…don’t tell anyone…smiles

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  19. I agree…well done! Twisted all over the place to an unexpected and satisfying close.

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  20. colonialist says:

    Love it! Bits of lunch roll now have to be cleaned off the keyboard …
    I took a bite as I got to the cats bit.

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  21. Misky says:

    Oh! This gave me a huge smile! Well done, Viv.

    >

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