A puff of air fluffs onto my face,
wafts a hint of mint towards me.
The soft moist touch of skin
flickers across my eyelids,
creeps down my cheeks.
dots little pecks on the way.
Firm pressure parts my lips
thought stops,
sensation takes over.
Meeting the Bar at dVerse Poets’ Pub is asking us to write without using our eyes, concentrate on other sens. This was VERY difficult!
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You old romantic!
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Tender sweetness…vivent le basier!
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careful how you use that word baiser. As a verb it goes further than just a peck on the cheek!
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I would imagine thoughts would completely cease. really lovely.
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OoooH, la-la! Smiles here!
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Viv. Viv. How beautiful. You have captured the intimacy of a real kiss – a knowing kiss shared by two in love. So sensual! Amy
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Oh so beautifully sensuous – sensation takes over indeed.
Anna :o]
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it was difficult but great results =) this seems like an Amelie kiss. =)
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The gentleness is overpowering, seductive, leading to the heat, when touch intensifies, when mind fog rolls in, when eros begin to steer the ship.
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Beautifully sensual piece. Intimate, fresh – moreso. 😉
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Well, at least you had a kiss to write about. What am I to do, here alone? hee hee. Loved this, Viv!
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Pure fiction, laced with long ago memory!
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I can relate….;)…sweet and sensual poem.
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It certainly moved smoothly, tinged with lots of goodness in feel. Wonderful shot Viv!
Hank
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butterfly kisses 🙂
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It certainly didn’t read like it was difficult. One thing I noticed (that I often overlook) was the most effective use of internal rhyme.
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i enjoyed the softness in this
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This is lovely, Viv.
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oo la…very nice…i like the anticipation the small touches that lead up to that moment when you are taken away….smiles….mint, not bad…smiles.
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Ooh, a lovely kiss… mmm 🙂
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That should certainly arouse … interest! 🙂
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hmmmm nice… i love kissing…ha… who doesn’t… fresh brushed teeth or not…smiles
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I really like the details the mint the sensation… really a great and sensuous take Viv.. lovely.
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Oh, I really like the sensuality of this, Viv!
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