Trifecta sets us quite a challenge this week: exactly 33 words on love gone wrong WITHOUT using the words: love, sad, tears, wept, heart, pain
Remember that initial buzz,
the sparkle putting a glow on life
on meeting your special person?
Remember then the grief
that turns your life to grey
when he spurns you, turns you loose.
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I loved “turns your life to grey” and turns you loose. So evocative. Excellent!
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I love ‘turns you loose’. Makes me think of tornadoes or wild animals. Nicely done.
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I love pieces that all readers can relate to. I’m willing to bet most people remember both of these moments. Beautifully written, Viv.
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Yes, I remember all too well. And you presented both feelings perfectly. 🙂
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It’s so sad, when love turns
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I would agree.. that turn.. couldn’t be worse…
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Lots to remember here. Awesome work!
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Yes, totally remember both the feelings.. gud attempt !
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So sad when love turns out this way.
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Spurn. What a great word.
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Oh, that’s sad!
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