SHADOW HAIGA

for Octpowrimo day 12shadow haiga 

There’s another shadow poem here.

Stand in the right place at the right time
and my shadow makes me look tall.
A few hours later and I become small.
At mid-day I don’t exist at all.

About https://vivinfrance.wordpress.com

All poetry, prose and pictures posted here, except where otherwise stated, is my own, and may only be used elsewhere with my expressed permission. Please don't be inhibited from correcting my bloopers and making suggestions: Most of what I post here is instant, ill-considered and off-the-cuff, in serious need of editing.
This entry was posted in haiga. Bookmark the permalink.

10 Responses to SHADOW HAIGA

  1. Wonderful. Left me smiling.

    Like

  2. Esther Jones says:

    This created quite an image in my head. Nice.

    Like

  3. And at night? If there is a moon, and if there is not.

    Like

  4. beautiful! and a very innovative way of writing on the suitable picture. amazing! 🙂

    Like

  5. Shah Wharton says:

    I second Ron’s assessment. Perfection at a glance!

    Like

  6. Beautifully layered, loved it 🙂

    Like

  7. Ron Potter says:

    Perfect metaphor of existence. I love a poem that takes your attention right away and leaves you with an aha!

    Like

I love it when you leave a Reply

Fill in your details below or click an icon to log in:

WordPress.com Logo

You are commenting using your WordPress.com account. Log Out / Change )

Twitter picture

You are commenting using your Twitter account. Log Out / Change )

Facebook photo

You are commenting using your Facebook account. Log Out / Change )

Google+ photo

You are commenting using your Google+ account. Log Out / Change )

Connecting to %s