Octpowrimo Day 10 – a cop out

The Octpo prompt for day entailed looking for another poem and either incorporating bits or writing an answer.

My day today does not allow
a thorough search for inspiration
and so I sigh and mop my brow
and steal from RJ Clarken
her prompt to write a Saraband
a rhythmic, rhyme you understand,
in doggerel less than spartan.

Here’s my attempt, which you will also find at Poetic Bloomings

Saraband

I think it would be good to dance
but if I tried the pain would lance
so sad to say I have no chance.
The music plays inside my head
the will is there but pain I dread.
The time will come when bone will mend
and I shall dance – a happy end.

 

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9 Responses to Octpowrimo Day 10 – a cop out

  1. Q says:

    I love these short poems! Both made me smile and lifted up my mood. Great job!

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  2. colonialist says:

    Something to look forward to, indeed! I wonder how many people would set their sights on a Sarabande, these days? Oh, thanks – now you’ve triggered off Grieg’s Holberg Suite on my mental player …

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  3. yikici says:

    This is so cute. 😀

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  4. it’s a perfect little diddy. 🙂

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  5. Wonderful and hopeful and positive. Love.

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  6. Shah Wharton says:

    You managed that without fault Viv. I loved the positive ending. X

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  7. ladynimue says:

    Amazing .. you make this rhyme look so fun and lively ..

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