2 SENRYU

for Haiku Heights, Day 28  – I’m late .     PILLOW

Billowy softness
to support a weary head –
personal heaven

and Day 29 – I’m early                               MOTHER

Most cherishing
person to be cherished
from start to finish.

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9 Responses to 2 SENRYU

  1. Eha says:

    ‘Pillow’ and ‘Mother’ ~ both soft and cherishing and oft absolutely necessary . . . one can buy but one . . .

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  2. I haven’t had a comfortable pillow in years. We keep buying new ones in the hope, but with no luck.

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  3. cheers for every mother
    well done

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  4. magicalmysticalteacher says:

    My mother “finished” ten years ago. I still cherish her.

    Mother

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  5. Waltermarks says:

    Hey, hey. Let’s hear it for moms.

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  6. Sumana Roy says:

    ah …. mothers………our abode of peace…..so well expressed…

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  7. Usha Menon says:

    Nice take. I loved the thought of most cherishing person to be cherished.

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