Haiku Heights Challenge 18 – White

Swaddled in white –
whatever will become of
newborn innocence?

She wears bridal white
hoping for love eternal
despite life’s seesaw.

The colour of grief
in many Eastern countries
for departed love.


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14 Responses to Haiku Heights Challenge 18 – White

  1. Viv, a powerful hardhitting poem. I love the contrasts as well.



  2. siggiofmaine says:

    Like the contrast of the two verses.
    Thank you.
    Siggi in Downeast Maine


  3. Isn’t it interesting how various cultures attribute different symbolism to different colors? And what a great play on this you made in these haiku, Viv.


  4. Viv, your haiku voice is striking, you have really great revelation or turning points in these!


  5. Tarang Sinha says:

    Wonderful set of haiku!:)


  6. Very well done Viv. Great series of haiku.


  7. kaykuala says:

    A great rounding off of a life history, Viv! White has always been fascinating of a pureness and innocence!



  8. You are truly an ‘enlightened woman’ ~ shows in your wonderful haiku ~ thanks, namaste, ^_^


  9. Mr. Walker says:

    Lovely – from birth to marriage to death. (Stressful events all).



  10. Grace says:

    I like all the takes of white…from birth to death ~



  11. magicalmysticalteacher says:

    The meaning of white is in the eyes of the beholder…

    “Hungry Sunrise Fire & White Bird”


  12. I had the same allusion – wedding and mourning – in my haiku! I love how you present three stages of life through colour. (I used to spell it with a “u” when I lived in Europe..now my computer tells me it’s a misprint, but for the sake of the memories and for you, Viv – it’s “colour” once more! 🙂


  13. Tilly Bud says:

    Love the contrasts. I would love to marry in red, like they do in India.


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