Heights of Haiku Challenge 5 – waves

Posted on April 5, 2012 by https://vivinfrance.wordpress.com

Waving goodbye
can be just a politeness
or prelude to tears

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Wanton willow tree
waves wildly in the West wind,
hangs limp in a calm.

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8 Responses to Heights of Haiku Challenge 5 – waves

  1. becca givens says:
    April 6, 2012 at 02:51

    Great job, Viv!! 🙂
    This is my Day 5 ~~ Waves Wash Over Me.

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  2. siggiofmaine says:
    April 6, 2012 at 02:31

    I love the willow tree haiku…
    great capture.
    Peace,
    Siggi in Downeast Maine

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  3. Patti says:
    April 5, 2012 at 20:24

    I like both of these. The first is such a familiar feeling. Well done.

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  4. Invisible Silence says:
    April 5, 2012 at 16:51

    loved the first one..cud connect to it so well..thanku for both:)

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  5. Mr. Walker says:
    April 5, 2012 at 14:16

    Viv, love both of these – great contrasts in both.

    Richard

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  6. Mariya Koleva says:
    April 5, 2012 at 10:16

    The first one is a smasher!

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  7. Chevrefeuille says:
    April 5, 2012 at 09:03

    Good day Viv, love to read your haiku. Nice to see you again in a new haiku challenge. This haiku is wonderful.

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  8. Ramesh Sood says:
    April 5, 2012 at 07:45

    Awesome and beautiful.. first one oh..how many times we experience this..

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