Heights of Haiku Challenge 4

Posted on April 4, 2012 by https://vivinfrance.wordpress.com

Doubt

Doubts come to confound
the truth with muddled logic
and refuse to leave

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Undoubtedly Spring,
then unseasonable snow
covered  the blossom

*

There may be no plums
no bees have  yet visited
delicious blossom.


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7 Responses to Heights of Haiku Challenge 4

  1. magicalmysticalteacher says:
    April 5, 2012 at 02:14

    If the plums don’t come, then seize and devour the blossom!

    Cactus Did Not Doubt

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  2. Patti says:
    April 4, 2012 at 22:39

    Lovely, Viv. I especially like the second one. That is so New England, especially this year.

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  3. Victoria C. Slotto says:
    April 4, 2012 at 18:12

    I like the simplicity of this one. It happens so frequently in Reno. One year is never like another it seems. Unpredictable.

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  4. brenda w says:
    April 4, 2012 at 12:24

    The first one is my favorite, Viv. Maybe because it feels like an old friend.

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  5. elleceef says:
    April 4, 2012 at 12:08

    These haiku are beautiful – the middle one is my favourite . Thank you.

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  6. Mariya Koleva says:
    April 4, 2012 at 11:54

    Wonderful. The first one is my favorite.

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  7. Tilly Bud says:
    April 4, 2012 at 11:19

    The middle one is my favourite because it so perfectly describes what’s happening.

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