Heights of Haiku Challenge 3


After storm at sea
lights of home harbour beckon,
a welcome relief.


In a ferry port
all is coming and going
excitement and fear.


The safest haven
at the end of every day –
a welcoming bed.

for Day 3 at http://haiku-heights.blogspot.fr/p/heights-of-haiku-april-2012.html

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12 Responses to Heights of Haiku Challenge 3

  1. wordcoaster says:

    My favorite was also the last–love the idea of a bed as a safe harbor 🙂


  2. becca givens says:

    After being at sea for over a week on a cruise — I certainly relate to the last one!! 🙂

    This is my Day 3 ~~ Harbor.


  3. I like the story line and the safest haven.


  4. Geraldine says:

    these are wonderful. like the last one most of all. 🙂


  5. Ramesh Sood says:

    I liked the last one lost.. after my new entry at midnight here in India..I will hit the bed.. 🙂


  6. Karen says:

    LOvely trio!


  7. Mr. Walker says:

    Lovely. I like all three.



  8. All haiku provide welcome sanctuary ~ well written ~ thanks, namaste, ^_^


  9. elleceef says:

    Very nice haiku set. My favorite is the last one. I do feel my bed is a safe haven 🙂


  10. brenda w says:

    Nicely done, Viv. Makes me wish I could stay in my welcoming bed a bit longer this morning. 🙂


  11. Tilly Bud says:

    I like the contrast.


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