Secret, for Writers Island


spark within the flame
joy in a young girl’s being
love is in the air

Secret 2

I’m not telling –
it’s a secret


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11 Responses to Secret, for Writers Island

  1. totomai says:

    double meaning? hehe

    lovely write and i like the two stanza style here.


  2. It’s only a secret if you keep it.


  3. So, a real secret, ha? So witty!


  4. versebender says:

    Short, sweet, nice…good work. Vb


  5. Gloria says:

    A nice secret…..I like! 🙂


  6. Mike Patrick says:

    I’m trying to figure out if that qualifies as a double entedre. LOL.


  7. Short but secretively sweet.


  8. RJ Clarken says:

    As Tilly said – double like! ☼


  9. Tilly Bud says:

    This is sweet, Viv.


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