Holidays for BigTent

Big Tent 21/2/11 holiday prompt didn’t really grab me, but I had a go.

Holidays – all the happy people
         Friendship Day – if it doesn’t exist, it should
         Poetry Day – be sure to read or write some
         Smile day – make us all grin

Anti-holiday – all the lonely people, 
          debts and rows and  family splits

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         Commercial fest and then the sales start.
         If you’ve any sense that’s when to buy
         gifts for next year, and put them by.
         Remember where you’ve hidden them.

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22 Responses to Holidays for BigTent

  1. trisha says:

    splendid ideas viv, i too can use them 🙂

    trisha
    http://sharmishthabasu.wordpress.com/2011/03/16/new-holiday/

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  2. Renee says:

    I’ve so enjoyed reading your ‘gifts’ of writing. In response to your comment on my prose. I don’t yet have a site but am taking it into consideration. Thank you for
    your responses.

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  3. cloakedmonk says:

    I think it is too funny that there were two prompts floating around that were the opposite of each other. Great reflections of each other.

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  4. Mike Patrick says:

    Well done. For a prompt that didn’t grab you, you found a nice selection.

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  5. earlybird says:

    How did I miss this in February? I so totally agree with the second part.

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  6. Laurie Kolp says:

    Cute! I always seem to forget my hiding spots, too.

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  7. “remember where you’ve hidden them” — a great line for this theme and perhaps something entirely unrelated!

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  8. Deb says:

    Glad you had a go!

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  9. Cathy says:

    Hey at least you tempted something and got something. Love the last one. Done that and forgot about it,

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  10. wayne says:

    enjoyed this Viv….thanks for this

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  11. Irene says:

    I wanted to second “Smile day”.. great minds think alike!

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  12. Tumblewords says:

    Seems there is always an either or. I like the way you juxtaposed these holidays and anti.

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  13. I like your definition of anti-holiday. Very clever.

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  14. b says:

    I invariably find little presents squirreled away, say: okay then, next year; forget them again.

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  15. Tilly Bud says:

    Grumpy today, aren’t we? 🙂

    I like them.

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  16. Dick Jones says:

    I’m kind of taken with the notion of an anti-holiday, Viv – albeit a less grisly one than you contemplate! I’ve never been much of a joiner and I like the sense of a day for the disaffected.

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  17. I really like your description of anti-holiday,
    Anti-holiday – all the lonely people,
    debts and rows and family splits
    Kind of reminds me what a holiday becomes when we have another intense event that is overshadowing it, the anti-holiday.

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  18. Linda says:

    I like your litany of holidays. May I second Friendship Day. I agree—holidays for lonely people can be devastating.

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  19. pamela says:

    Viv, I love the first part.

    Pamela

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  20. Guess I’m not the only one who discovers a package wrapped on Santa Clause paper the week of the 4th of July! Nice poems.

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  21. nan says:

    I like your suggested holidays, and you have nailed what makes the anti-holiday.

    Re: the second poem – I am not much of a shopper, and the few times I have stowed away an early gift, I have had to tear things up looking for where I hid them!

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  22. I enjoyed your verse. And you’re right about remembering where you’ve hidden them. 🙂

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