Moth Whispers

for Thursday Poetry Rally http://jingleyanqiu.wordpress.com/2010/09/22/thursday-poets-rally-week-29-sept-23-29/

This is a poem from last year, a quasi sonnet:

Moth Whispers

 Moth whispers brush the bedside lamp.
Summer’s here, with  nightly fear
of fluttering, biting, stinging things.
Tossing, turning, sweating, burning
from  daily overdose of  sun.
Moth-wings tapping at lighted windows,
starlit nights with yearning filled.
Through winter’s dark she’d longed for summer,
sleeveless frocks and sun-browned limbs.
Freedom, lightness, like the moth-wings
flicker in untroubled youth.

Crept October soon upon her,
dreaming of Eros by frosty sky.
Autumn chill, and moth-wings  still.

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23 Responses to Moth Whispers

  1. tracyhsays says:

    This is so well done…I could imagine every line as I read, and it flows so easily that one hardly notices he’s reading….but just having a thought. Nicely crafted, my friend.

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  3. Jingle says:

    return favor to those who are here would set you off in a good run…
    Cheers!
    Happy Wednesday!
    🙂

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  4. Jingle says:

    Happy Monday!
    Thanks for the participation.

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  5. sparkling poem.
    somehow reminded me of tulips (sylvia plath). though your poem is much quieter. loved it anyway. 🙂

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  6. Sina Saberi : The Blog says:

    seasons and more…

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  7. Dreaming of Eros… Nice image. Love and Light, Sender

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  8. mairmusic says:

    I love the concept of moth wings as it overlays the line of sunbrown arms. Simply lovely!

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  9. Tilly Bud says:

    I remember this. A delicate poem.

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  10. ooooh! I can feel this piece…such rich texture and delivered upon the wings of a moth!

    I am honoured to share another rally week with you!

    http://lovelyannie79.wordpress.com/2010/09/23/portrait-of-a-lady/

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  12. Ron. says:

    Yeah, you don’t think you’re gonna miss them little buggers til they’re gone, eh? Well done.

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  13. This is an amazing poem…evokes the seasons and changes so well. And you use such good sensory description.

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  14. amanda says:

    Vivienne, I am a nut for Summer, this was wonderful for me it embodies many of the reason I love this season!

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  15. tasithoughts says:

    The poem is lovely to say out loud. It is a feast of words.

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  16. ladynimue says:

    indeed a unique take on autumn 🙂

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  17. Well done! The yearning for summer the moment autumn has just begun is clearly evident in your poem. Now if only I can get rid of the moths in my kitchen! 🙂

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  18. Rätsel Ewig says:

    “Freedom, lightness, like the moth-wings
    flicker in untroubled youth.”
    well written indeed!

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  19. Jingle says:

    love autumn chill,

    a poem in depth, well written…
    Thanks for sharing!

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  20. Jingle says:

    admirable job.
    love your instant response and sincere support.
    🙂

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