It’s All a Matter of Taste

 

Spinning, spinning, spinning
that’s all I’m allowed to do.
Spin this stupid straw
into cloth of gold.
He’s going to kill me
when all the straw is gone,
so I have spun a cunning plan.

Every night when he’s asleep
I carefully unwind
all the work I’ve done that day.
I pray that he won’t rumble me
or tumble me,
until my hero  comes for me.

But who’s this monstrous goblin
come to rescue me?
He’s not what I expected -
I think I’ll change my plan -
My taskmaster is not so bad,
I’ll take him for my man.

For We Write Poems, who suggest we write as a character in a fairy story.  I changed the ending – I didn’t fancy Rumpelstiltskin.

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All poetry and prose posted here, except where otherwise stated, is my own, and may only be used elsewhere with my expressed permission. Please don't be inhibited from correcting my bloopers and making suggestions: Most of what I post here is instant, ill-considered and off-the-cuff, in serious need of editing.
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10 Responses to It’s All a Matter of Taste

  1. Shallow! But closer to truth, I suspect :)

  2. Wayne says:

    nicely spun indeed Viv…thanks for sharing your words

  3. Judy Roney says:

    This is such fun to read, especially the ending that leaves me laughing.

  4. Ruth says:

    a nicely poetic twist on the fairytale..

  5. A fun write. Rumpelstiltskin and the spinning of straw into gold has visited my poetry too.

  6. I liked the twist! I was thinking Rumplestilskin and then you flipped it, well done. :)

  7. LOL a cute post! MY GOD IS AN AWESOME GOD!

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