Sensory Overload

Oh! Wow!
Contemplating
somehow

beauty
of line or sound,
floaty

dancing,
perfect scent, en-
trancing

This is in Musette, form created by Emily Romano:  a poem that consists of three verses of three lines each.  The first lines have two syllables; the rhyme scheme is a/b/a for the first verse; the second lines have four syllables, the scheme is c/d/c for the second verse, and the third lines have two syllables.  e/f/e is the rhyme scheme for the third verse. The title should reflect the poem’s content.

In my  state of lack of inspiration, I have combined the Musette from Poetic Bloomings with the WoW prompt from the Imaginary Garden and my contribution to the Mindful Writing Challenge. at mindful-writing-challenge-badge_thumb.jpg

 

 

 

 

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13 Responses to Sensory Overload

  1. What a great form…delightful poem!

  2. Sherry Marr says:

    This poem floats on the page. I love it!

  3. Herotomost says:

    Beauty of line or sound…what a great line, and pretty descriptive of the poem itself. I even like the title of the form, musette, geting a point across in short but beautiful order I think. Great job on the wow factor!!!

  4. sreeja says:

    Loved it.. both the form and the feel in it… the wow about it… :-)

  5. I like this very much but the forced enjambment spoils it. Perhaps forego the form for the sake of the words?

  6. This is a lovely form – renders the lightest poetical rhythm. Lovely.

  7. peggygoetz says:

    I like this Viv. I am always so impressed with poems that fit forms and still sound smooth. Hope you are back on your feet. (I am thinking you were recently in the hospital)

  8. Ella says:

    Viv, I love this form and what you did with it…I love the floaty feel-Wow!

  9. Mary says:

    I liked the way you used the form, Viv. And, Wow, your ideas were good. (smiles)

  10. Helen Dehner says:

    I had not known of this lovely form … your poem is ‘entrancing.’

  11. This is a delightful form, Viv. I like that floaty, dancing feel you created.

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