Milky Way

Posted on September 6, 2012 by



Silvery path
twirls around the sky -
too much space

 for Haiku Heights Challenge, Day 6
image:  Wikipedia

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11 Responses to Milky Way

  2. Leo says:
    September 8, 2012 at 07:46

    The milky way has too much space :D How intriguing…

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  3. Someone is Special says:
    September 8, 2012 at 00:40

    too much?? liked it Viv..

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  4. Magical Mystical Teacher says:
    September 7, 2012 at 00:06

    You need a little less space, Viv? :)

    Milky Way

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  5. Chèvrefeuille says:
    September 6, 2012 at 17:40

    ‘Silvery path’ what a nice line to start this haiku … it unfolds to a magnificent image. Thank you Viv.

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  6. Patti says:
    September 6, 2012 at 15:52

    Oh, never too much space, especially for that swirling silver path.

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  7. merlinspielen says:
    September 6, 2012 at 15:00

    Oh that is clever use of the prompt. I enjoyed this haiku!

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  8. sharechair says:
    September 6, 2012 at 12:59

    I miss the sky. :( Too much light pollution…

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  9. Doodlemum says:
    September 6, 2012 at 08:37

    I saw the milky way for the first time when we camped this year. As there was no light pollution it was utterly breathtaking. I had no idea how beautiful it was.

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  11. ladynimue says:
    September 6, 2012 at 07:17

    too much ? haha ! nice :)

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