Moon

Moon

Romantic cliché
blue, harvest, or hunter’s moon
exerts tidal pull

for Haiku Heights day 4

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13 Responses to Moon

  1. Leo says:

    The moon and romance.. a perfect pairing eh? :) Loved it, Viv..

  2. So right … all those wonderful names given to her … but she still moves the tides.

  3. tigerbrite says:

    So true, the moon affects our moods as well as the pull of the oceans.

  4. Teresa says:

    I love the moon, cliche or not!

  5. Patti says:

    Interesting, Viv. I’m not fond of “moon” as a prompt, for exactly the reason you mentioned: it’s a bit of a cliché. But it does indeed exert a pull, over tides and people alike.

  6. Susan says:

    You’ve walked me into the heart of the cliche to see the practical side of moon. Very creative!

  7. Powerful, like the tidal pull, and nicely done

  8. You have a wry and delightful way, Viv, of bursting our preconceived bubbles!

    Pursuing the Moon

  9. It’s nice to be reminded of the association of the moon with the tide.

  10. Barbara says:

    Lush images with the haiku surprise. Love it!

  11. You packed a lot into three short lines.

  12. Ramesh Sood says:

    Yes, so many facets of Moon… good one Viv. hey, and thank you caught the angle very well…I have corrected… it had to be ANGEL…thanks for being one.. RS:)

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