Meaningless – the void
in my empty existence
after you were gone
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quite captivating VIv..
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Been there, done that, Viv
I sometimes still have an involuntary stiffled sob when I sigh. All love is gone but a tiny bit of the void remains.
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so sad…sometimes the place we must dwell for a time.
Very poignant.
You can feel the emotion and absence in this poem.
a sad time we all know ….!
Could not be more simply–or more poignantly. Well done, V.
Very poignant words.
Yes indeed. Nicely captured.
I hate to think anyone could be this lonely. You’ve certainly captured this emotion well.
The is so real and powerful. Thank you.
Painful and sad … loneliness painted in a few words. Chapeau.
Your capture of loneliness is so sad, resonating with emptiness. I could feel it.
Wonderful take on the challenge of the day – I like how you capture that loneliness isn’t what we have it is what we are left with…
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I have no doubt I will be delighted! Looking forward to more of your haiku and other writings.
You captured loneliness very well here. So sad.
There are times, however, when someone’s leaving us is a good thing, a cause for celebration.
A Long Loneliness
This hit hard .
A sad one.