Home, for Trifecta

inside the home that Jock built

There is no French word for home -
that place of comfort, love and warmth,
to be ourselves, safely alone
or in company with family or friends.
Chez nous is not the same.

The Trifecta prompt today requires a 33-333 word contribution using this definition of home,  a) a familiar or usual setting : congenial environment; also the focus of one’s domestic attention <home is where the heart is or b) habitat and including the actual word.  I choose to restrict myself to the challenge of  using only 33 words

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21 Responses to Home, for Trifecta

  1. It is so beautiful. How sad that you had to leave it.

    I love your poem; I was surprised to learn there’s no French for ‘home’.

  2. Viv, this is gorgeous! As is your home. Thank you for sharing.

  3. Your description of home was apt and flooded me with a sense of comfort. How odd the French don’t have a word for it. It seems it would be a universal concept.
    Thanks for linking up. Come on back tomorrow for the new challenge.

  4. restlessjo says:

    Aww, it must’ve been hard to part with, Viv, but practicality has to win sometimes, doesn’t it? Like your poem, and your ex-home. I’m sure the new one is inviting too.

  5. Annabelle says:

    Interesting! My level of fluency isn’t high enough to really get that sort of nuance.

  6. that is exactly what home is. and the picture is an excellent representation of a home, snug and warm and safe. and that is a good point. i took french for five years (sad to say i’m not very good at it after all that time haha) and there really isn’t a word that captures the essence of ‘home’. your piece was very simple and sweet and made me feel at home. (:

  7. really like the picture. like the idea of home being where we can truly be ourselves

  8. jannatwrites says:

    How interesting that there isn’t a French word for home. I learned something new. The room in the picture is beautiful, I especially like the stone walls and the wood beams/accents.

  9. Lumdog says:

    It is so interesting that the French don’t have a word for “home”. It makes me wonder, of all those words for “Igloo”, does one of them mean “home?” Nice take on the prompt.

  10. Patti says:

    I’ve always believed that English allows so much nuance that other languages sometimes can’t match. (For example, consider all the ways one can say “walk” (stroll, strut, saunter, amble, march, sashay, etc. and the degrees of difference in their meanings.) The absence of a word for “home” in French is a case in point. That being said, there are also words in other languages with wonderful meanings where English has no word to compare. (Umami and joie de vivre – and joy of living just doesn’t do it — come to mind.)

    P.S. The room in the photo is gorgeous!

  11. Carrie says:

    simple yet speaks volumes. Nice job :)

  12. I love the photo – I love homes built in old barns and farmhouses in France. So strange that there isn’t a word for it… I thought and thought, thinking that I must be able to come up with something but I couldn’t. Have a good day!

  13. aprille says:

    Makes me think:
    how do you define the difference between:
    -I’m home-and -I’m at home’?
    I’m sure we all know it but I can’t put it into words.

  14. jmgoyder says:

    I wonder why the French don’t have a word for home – that seems so odd.

  15. rosross says:

    What a lovely home. I can feel the wonderful vibes through the ether. The poem does it justice.

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