Flight


                                                                       photo from Google images

Journeys are tedious: hurry up and then wait.
Waiting to check-in by slow shuffling paces,
queuing to pass through security gate.
Nothing but suffering useless announcements
banal, and repetitive, not at all clear.
Peer at high screens showing times and places;
flight number eternally fails to appear.

Flight was once thought to be an adventure.
and now it is hours of contraptions of torture
masquerading as seats  that are bruising my rear,
blood flow stopped dead at the back of my knees.
Will nothing release me? The time must be near.

A miracle happens, blurred voice from the ceiling:
‘Proceed to gate fourteen now if you please.’

Margo Roby’s prompt is the schoolteacher’s September stock-in-trade :  ”What I did on my vacation.” We don’t normally do vacations, as we live in prime vacation territory, but I do go and see my kids from time to time.  The interminable waiting associated with flight always leaves me with notebooks full of scribbled poetry, most of it the result of jangled nerves.

This coincided with the Trifecta challenge to write about Flight in 33-333 words.  For once, 33 words were not sufficient for this quasi-sonnet.

About vivinfrance

All poetry and prose posted here, except where otherwise stated, is my own, and may only be used elsewhere with my expressed permission. Please don't be inhibited from correcting my bloopers and making suggestions: Most of what I post here is instant, ill-considered and off-the-cuff, in serious need of editing.
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16 Responses to Flight

  1. Agree with Misky (above). Perfect reminder of something I hate to do.

  2. Annabelle says:

    That encapsulates all of the worst things about air travel! Nicely done.

  3. jannatwrites says:

    I’m not a fan of air travel, but I do like your poem about the misery of it :)

  4. Wisper says:

    I do love to travel but I hate the whole airport/airplane thing. You did well conjuring those dreaded images.

  5. You really captured the drudgery of flight well. Thanks for linking up. Please come on back tomorrow for the new challenge.

  6. kgwaite says:

    Ah, well done. I remember when my grandparents dressed up to fly…and to go to doctors.

  7. Hmm. If we are clever enough, we can fulfill two assignments (or are they prompts) with one poem. So, it cost a few more than 33 words — look at what you saved!
    Thanks to Tilly for opening my eyes to your excellent craft. I’ll be back.

  8. margo roby says:

    This I love: ‘endearing lyrical grouchiness’. Thoroughly enjoyed your flight, not flight sonnet. I used to enjoy flying. I’m sure I did.

  9. Lumdog says:

    The pain and tedium of air travel in a delightful poem. Love this.

  10. ManicDdaily says:

    Ha! Very clever, very true. You manage an endearing lyrical grouchiness here – of course, you’re also spot on. k.

  11. See, there’s always a silver lining! Horrible experience = a poem we can all relate to :)

  12. Misky says:

    (clapping) Thoroughly enjoyed this one, Viv. Such a vivid reminder of my dislike of air travel!

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