photo from Google images
Journeys are tedious: hurry up and then wait.
Waiting to check-in by slow shuffling paces,
queuing to pass through security gate.
Nothing but suffering useless announcements
banal, and repetitive, not at all clear.
Peer at high screens showing times and places;
flight number eternally fails to appear.
Flight was once thought to be an adventure.
and now it is hours of contraptions of torture
masquerading as seats that are bruising my rear,
blood flow stopped dead at the back of my knees.
Will nothing release me? The time must be near.
A miracle happens, blurred voice from the ceiling:
‘Proceed to gate fourteen now if you please.’
Margo Roby’s prompt is the schoolteacher’s September stock-in-trade : ”What I did on my vacation.” We don’t normally do vacations, as we live in prime vacation territory, but I do go and see my kids from time to time. The interminable waiting associated with flight always leaves me with notebooks full of scribbled poetry, most of it the result of jangled nerves.
This coincided with the Trifecta challenge to write about Flight in 33-333 words. For once, 33 words were not sufficient for this quasi-sonnet.


Agree with Misky (above). Perfect reminder of something I hate to do.
That encapsulates all of the worst things about air travel! Nicely done.
I’m not a fan of air travel, but I do like your poem about the misery of it
I do love to travel but I hate the whole airport/airplane thing. You did well conjuring those dreaded images.
You really captured the drudgery of flight well. Thanks for linking up. Please come on back tomorrow for the new challenge.
Ah, well done. I remember when my grandparents dressed up to fly…and to go to doctors.
Hmm. If we are clever enough, we can fulfill two assignments (or are they prompts) with one poem. So, it cost a few more than 33 words — look at what you saved!
Thanks to Tilly for opening my eyes to your excellent craft. I’ll be back.
Thank you Katharine. I look forward to seeing you.
This I love: ‘endearing lyrical grouchiness’. Thoroughly enjoyed your flight, not flight sonnet. I used to enjoy flying. I’m sure I did.
The pain and tedium of air travel in a delightful poem. Love this.
Ha! Very clever, very true. You manage an endearing lyrical grouchiness here – of course, you’re also spot on. k.
Only almost? Where did I go wrong?
Hmmm– I think I said “also” spot on! I’m not sure where the almost is either. k.
Oops, careless reading!
See, there’s always a silver lining! Horrible experience = a poem we can all relate to
(clapping) Thoroughly enjoyed this one, Viv. Such a vivid reminder of my dislike of air travel!